Monday, February 14, 2011

Bar-brawl
















The bar den is busting at the seams                         
Screams, laughter, beer breath permeate
the air in the extreme
Chasing blue notes & a Rocknroll dream
Highballs, ice & 'meister flow like a fucking stream

Social drunks & dancers glide around the floor
Shaken not stirred at their very core
The carpet sucks up every fucking pour
Rowdy aces & bruisers will be kicked right out the door

©2011 LLR
(wrote while at the local pub)
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4 comments:

  1. BubbaFebruary 14, 2011 at 10:55 AM

    This is really cool and has a great groove, just like a great tune that moves your feet!

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  2. UnknownFebruary 15, 2011 at 4:05 AM

    I'm with Eric! Nice one!

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  3. ReinhardRitesFebruary 15, 2011 at 3:07 PM

    Excellent. Short and sweet.
    Enjoying the blog, Sister.

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  4. KatleyFebruary 19, 2011 at 9:14 AM

    exactly the reason why I avoid bars:)

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